hello bloggers today I am going to be showing you my story at first I couldn't find what to write about but then I got an idea do you like writing stories I personally find it quite fun
Friday, August 20, 2021
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Hi Tom!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing. I love how you have started your story in the middle of the action - already running from the goblins! I wonder why the goblins couldn't get to the train tracks? Did two days actually pass, or did it just feel like two days? Maybe it's the never ending tunnel...
Next time don't forget to highlight the language features that you are learning at the moment. Good job on your punctuation, don't forget that when I stands alone it is always a capital I :-)
Ka mau te wehi
Miss Roberts
Hi Tom
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. It was quite exciting and mysterious. I wonder what happens next.