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Friday, July 24, 2020

 this is i slide about what I did in the school holidays I did some pretty cool stuff but now my dad's got a sore back from ice skating

2 comments:

  1. hi my name is Lochlan from Ahipara school. I enjoyed the part when you played on your xbox. Did you think about that THAT you spelt it Wrong. Why did you do that slid?

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  2. Hi good job
    Apart from next time check your spelling.

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