Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 23, 2020
My Journey poem
In Miss Roberts Literacy Ms Roberts we are making a poem to send to another school in the North Island. #GetNZWriting. This is my poem. Have you been on a journey? Make sure to tell me all about it!
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Tom! Great job on this writing activity, perhaps when we get back to school we might be able to contact our sharing school in Raglan!
ReplyDeleteWow Tom, my favourite line is, sand that looks like nuggets! Let's hope we can do more writing with the school in Raglan, ka pai!
ReplyDeletehi Tom I really like your poem it is really good I liked that you use capital letters. keep going in keep the good work up.!!!!
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